Severance agreement arrived, need a second opinion after 8 years as an insurance claims processor

My manager said the package is final, but the letter gives me time to review. I do not usually post, so bear with me. It includes health coverage for a couple of months. Did anyone negotiate and succeed?

I asked for two more weeks and a neutral reference. They agreed to the reference and added a week.

An hour with an employment lawyer cost me a small fee and made me feel much safer about signing.