Offer arrived, can I still ask for more?, store manager here

It is the first offer in 14 months and I do not want to mess it up. I worked as a store manager before this. The benefits are decent. What wording worked?

Thanks for writing this out. I went through something close to it last year, and it settled down once I kept a simple log of every call and form.

Most employers expect a short conversation. Mine did not even blink.