Offer arrived, can I still ask for more?, quality inspector here

I received an offer as a quality inspector and I think the pay is a little low. Any experience at all would help. The hiring manager was friendly and open.

I thanked them and said I was excited but hoped we could talk about the pay. They came back with a bit more.

Thanks for writing this out. I went through something close to it 9 months ago, and it got easier once I kept a simple log of every call and form.